1. EXT. ELINOR’S HOUSE - DAY "this has come together nicely a few notes as you still have some dialogue pertaining to her having a cold. Also the script is a bit long so i made a few suggestions. Plus production design notes " I think this looks great. I can't wait to see it in animation. A few minor comments below Olive and Ari arrive at Elinor’s house, playfully <SFX: GIGGLING> ready for a great play day, Ari <SFX: KNOCKS> and Mr. Rabbit opens the door. Ari Hi, Mister Rabbit. Can Elinor come out and play? Mr. Rabbit Sorry, kids. Elinor can’t play outside today, she’s in bed with a sore foot . OLIVE (with concern) Oh, no! What happened? MR. RABBIT Nothing to worry about, just a little bunny-hopping accident. OLIVE Can we visit her? Ari Yeah, maybe we can cheer her up. Mr. RABBIT That’s a really nice idea, kids . S he ’ll be so glad to see you. Off they go. 2. INT. ELINOR’S ROOM - DAY The kids stay by the door as Mr. Rabbit enters and sits on Elinor’s bed . Mr. RABBIT Hey, hunny bunny. You have some visitors. Olive and Ari stay by the door poking their noses in. OlIVE Hi, Elinor , how are you feeling? Ari Does your foot hurt? ELINOR Yeah, a little. I’m not a hoppy bunny today. MR. RABBIT Not to worry, kids, Elinor will be better soon, she just needs to rest. ArI A nd then, have a snack ! Snacks always make me feel better. OliVE And stories! My Mom always reads me s tories to cheer me up. ELINOR Oooh, stories. That sounds good. "her foot is sore - no longer about a cold. revise ""for a case of the sniffles than some good stories.""" Mr. RABBIT You’re right. There’s nothing better for a case of the sniffles than some good stories. Luckily Elinor has her own official story-book reader. we should delete the robot note and thought bubble - the script is a bit long - also we have many thought bubbles throughout this ep that will require new location designs - ArI (impressed) She DOES? Now THAT is cool! (dialogue over thought bubble) Beep boop . Once. Upon. A. Time… THOUGHT BUBBLE: Ari imagines a robot reading to Elinor. Olive (smiling) I think Mr. Rabbit is saying he’s the story-book reader . Mr. RABBIT Yep, that’s me! And I’ll be back in a sec to perform my official story-reading duties. Just let me show your visitors out. Elinor Okay Daddy. Adventure stories please! Ari Bye, Elinor. OliVE Get better soon. Seq3 - reads 'they enter through the kitchen' - the stairs from the bedroom lead to the family room and front door - they wouldnt go to the back of the house through the kitchen. we can have this conversation take place as they walk down and then stop at the front door ELINOR Thanks for visiting me! 3. IN T. KITCHEN -- DAY The kids and Mr. Rabbit enter the kitchen . Olive I wish we could do something for Elinor to help her feel better. Ari Hmmmm, sometimes when I’m sick my mom makes me soup. Mr. RABBIT Actually I was planning on making Elinor a batch of her favorite - Backyard Soup. Olive Backyard soup? What’s Backyard Soup? Ari Backyard Soup is the yummiest soup ever, I had some with Elinor and her parents once. They make it with all the veggies they grow in the back yard . OlIVE Really? That sounds soooo delicious . Can we help you make it, Mr. Rabbit? MR. RABBIT Why sure, that would be great, kids . Ari Awesome, what do we do first? then here he can gesture to the kitchen (the back of the house)- and leads the kids (we wont have an angle of the gard as they wont be able to see it from here) MR. RABBIT Mmmmmm ... You could pick the veggies from the garden . He gestures to the garden outside. ANGLE ON: The verdant veggie garden - yum ! Ari Of course , the first thing we need for Backyard Soup is backyard veggies! Olive But which veggies should we pick? they would be standing in the kitchen at this point MR. RABBIT Well, let’s see. We’ll need t omatoes, beans, beets and carrots to start. ArI Whoa that’s a LOTTA veggies. How are we gonna remember all those? OlIVE Can you make us a list , Mr. Rabbit? Olive takes out her notebook and crayons and hands them to Mr. Rabbit , who draws on the kitchen table . MR. RABBIT Good idea Olive. First we need round, red tomatoes. ANGLE ON: Mr. Rabbit draws tomatoes. Ari Then some long skinny green beans. I love those. ANGLE ON: Mr. Rabbit draws long, skinny green beans. Olive Also some beets . Those are purple. Mr. Rabbit draws purple beets with green tops. Mr. RABBIT Okay I think that’s it for now. Ari Uhh, Mr. Rabbit, aren’t you forgetting something...? OlIVE Elinor’s FAVORITE... Mr. RABBIT CARROTS! I almost forgot. Good thing I’ve got you kids around to help me out. (he draws orange carrots with some green leafy tops) So, can you two pick the veggies from the garden while I go and check on Elinor? OlIVE Sure thing, Mr. Rabbit , we’re good helpers. The kids will head of the back door through the kitchen. Mr.R wont have time to get all the way to the front of the house and up the stairs. Olus we next see him with a glass of water which I assume he would get from the kitchen, therefore we should end the seq, with him waving to kids as they exit. Ari It’s kind of our thing. Let’s go get those veggies. Olive waves her notebook as they head out to the garden and Mr. Rabbit heads back up the stairs . 4 . INT. ELINOR’S ROOM – DAY Dad enters with Elinor’s favorite adventure book and a glass of water. Mr. RABBIT Ready for a story, hunny bunny? EliNOR Yes, please, official story-book reader. An ADVENTURE story. remove action of her 'sniffle' she no longer has a cold MR. RABBIT Ah, yes. An ADVENTURE story. (he opens the books and reads) It was a beautiful day for an adventure and our Brave Explorer… Elinor interrupts with a sniffle. ElinOR Not just any Explorer Daddy ... Explorer ELINOR. MR. RABBIT Of course, my mistake, Explorer ELINOR . 5 . EXT. BACK YARD -- DAY In the back yard Olive and Ari search the garden. OlIVE Okay, let's find these veggies . F irst , we need round red tomatoes. ArI Tomatoes, tomatoes, tomatoes - oh, there they are! They’re g rowing on those plants. ANGLE ON: Plump red tomatoes high up on a staked tomato plant. OLIVE Wow! The tomatoes are so big the plants need to be held up by sticks. Ari adds them to the basket. Olive checks the list. OLIVE (CONT’D) That was easy. Next veggie, beans. ARI Not just any beans, long green yummy beans. (calling) Beans! Beans! Where are you beans? OLIVE Oh, I see them. They’re g rowing on the middle of those vines. ANGLE ON: The beans vines climbing poles. ARI Look at that. The bean vines are climb ing up the poles. Olive checks beans off her list. OLIVE We already found two of the veggies. We'll be done in no time. 6 . INT. ELINOR’S ROOM – DAY Dad is reading to Elinor as she snuggles in bed. MR. RABBIT Explorer Elinor was having the best adventure EVER. First she climbed a mountain. EliNOR A mountain? Was it very high? THOUGHT BUBBLE - Elinor climbing a mountain that gets higher and higher. MR. RABBIT The highest mountain you’ve ever seen ! Then she swam down to the bottom of the ocean. THOUGHT BUBBLE - Elinor swimming down to the bottom of the ocean. ELINOR A deep ocean? MR. RABBIT The deepest. Then she swung sideways through the jungle on a vine . THOUGHT BUBBLE - Elinor swings through the jungle, as we pan down. ELINOR W heeeeeeee!! That IS an amazing adventure, official storybook reader. MR. RABBIT Glad you like it, Explorer Elinor. 7 . EXT. ELINOR’S BACK YARD - DAY Ari and Olive are almost finished with their list . T hey have gathered all the veggies except for the carrots. Olive Okay, we’ve almost finished our list... all we need are beets . ArI ...and carrots! You can’t forget carrots! OLIVE Right, beets and carrots. Well, those should be easy to find because the beets are purple and the carrots are orange. ARI Yep, they should be pretty easy to spot in all these green leaves . Let's see ... orange carrots.. Orange, orange, orange... Huh. I don't see any orange veggies. Then Olive tries looking for the beets . Olive Let’s try the purple beets . Purple, purple, purple... I don't see any purple beets either. Where are they? 8 . INT. ELINOR’S ROOM - DAY Mister Rabbit is in mid-sentence. MR. RABBIT ...finally Explorer Elinor was happy to be back in her nice comfy bed, the end. (He hears a little <SFX: SNOORE> and looks over to see that Elinor has dozed off. He gives his daughter a little kiss on the forehead. ) Have a good rest, hunny bunny. He tiptoes out. 9 . EXT. ELINOR’S GARDEN -- DAY Ari is looking around, as Olive checks the “harvesting list” one more time. ArI Where are the carrots and beets ? Mr. Rabbtit said we needed them for the soup so they must be around here somewhere. Hmmm. What would Elinor do? OliVE She'd say, we need more observations! Let's look more closely at our veggie list. The y both look at the list. the script is a little long - can delete this line as its repeating what they just said about carrots Ari Ok , let’s start with the carrots. T he list says we need orange carrots. But I don't see any thing that’s orange in the garden. As Ari looks around the garden, Olive looks more closely at the list. Olive Wait a minute, Ari, l ook at this. The carrot isn’t just the pointy orange part, it has these green leaves at the end. ANGLE ON: The drawing of the carrot. could delete this line too - why would the carrots she buys not have the green leaves? we are always treated the veggies in the series as very natural and not purchased in bags without the leaves - especially since Olive also has line 88 ARI Hmmm. I do remember seeing those leaves on the carrots my mom buys. OlIVE Maybe we should look for those leaves. ARI Good idea. ( looks around) Look! Over there! Ari points. ANGLE ON: Carrot greens. Olive runs over and checks them out. OlIVE This is it, Ari. These leaves look like the leaves in the drawing – green and fuzzy . B ut where is the pointy orange carrot part? Ari looks down really low. Ari Hey Olive, check this out ! ANGLE ON: Ari notices a tiny spot of orange poking out of the earth - he moves the dirt away. OLIVE Wow, it looks like the top of an orange carrot, but it ’s buried underground. ArI Should we dig it up? Olive shrugs. The kids are considering what to do when Mr. Rabbit shows up. MR. RABBIT Hey kids, Elinor’s asleep so I thought I’d come out and give you a... (noticing) ...what are you looking at? Mr. Rabbit gets down and joins them on the ground. OlIVE We’re looking at a v eggie mystery, Mr. Rabbit . Ari We' ve been trying to find carrots, but we ha ven 't found any. We thought they would be growing on the plant, like tomatoes and beans. But now we think THIS is the carrot. Ari points to the carrot. MR. RABBIT I see. And w hat makes you think that? OlIVE Well it has the same green fuzzy leaves that we always see on carrots . ArI And when we looked closer we saw this orange part peeking from the ground . Mr. RABBIT Great investigating kids. You’re right -- it IS a carrot! Ari I KNEW it! OliVE But wh y is the carrot under the ground? after 93 - this will need to be a thought bubble to show this type of visual Mr. RABBIT Carrots aren’ t like tomatoes and beans, Olive. The part that we like to eat is actually the root of the plant. That’s why it’s underground. As Mr. Rabbit talks, we see a wide shot showing a cross section of the garden that shows the orange part of the carrot under the ground <SFX: KIDS WHOA WA LLA> . OliVE /ari That is soo interesting . They both <SFX: LAUGH> ARI B ut... how do you get the carrot OUT of the ground ? Mr. RABBIT You just give the plant a pull. Go ahead. Ari and Olive each pull a car rot OUT of the ground, falling over backwards as they do. OlIVE WOW! ARI We pulled them right out! Mr. RABBIT See? The orange part is the root. That’s why carrots are called root vegetables. CLOSE ON: T he carrot. OlIVE Root vegetables. I LIKE those words. Ari looks to Mr. Rabbit . Ari So are beets root vegetables too ? We haven’t found those either. mR. RABBIT Yep . And so are turnips , radishes and potatoes, and we have them all -- ready to dig up in the garden. Ari Did you say dig? I LOVE to dig! SONG MONTAGE As they sing Ari , and Olive look at drawings of the veggies’ green leafy parts (carrots, beets, radishes, turnips, potatoes) and look for th em in the garden. They have uncovered the process for finding root vegetables. Maybe Olive draws a brown dirt line in her notebook. Then they dig up the veggies. Olive/ari OLIVE: Veggies are delicious, Veggies are the best. ARI: But did you know, Some veggies grow, Down deeper than the rest. OLIVE: The yummy part of a tomato, Grows out in the sun. ARI: But the yummy part of a carrot grows... Way down Underground. BOTH: Root veggies, root veggies, We all love our root veggies, Beets and potatoes, Carrots and turnips too, Root veggies are so yummy, And they make great soup for you! 1 0 . INT. ELINOR’S ROOM -- DAY Later that afternoon, Elinor is awake. Mister Rabbit comes into her room and sits on her bed. MR. RABBIT How are you feeling, honey bunny. Elinor stretches and yawns. ElINOR A little better. My foot doesn’t hurt as much . MR. RABBIT Good. Ready for another adventure story? ELINOR Uh-huh. MR. RABBIT You’re gonna like this one. It’s about the time Explorer Elinor had to stay in bed because her foot was sore . ELINOR Ooooh , I know how that feels. MR. RABBIT But it gets more exciting because her two friends Explorer Olive and Explorer Ari decide d to do something to make her feel better. ELINOR Really? MR. RABBIT Yep, they went on an Adventure in the garden to find vegetables to make Explorer Elinor her favorite soup. THOUGHT BUBBLE Olive and Ari march out into the Garden. ELINOR I like this story. MR. RABBIT T hey found almost all the veggies, but then there were some they couldn't find. PAN DOWN: to Elinor and her Dad. ELINOR Oh, no, then what happened? MR. RABBIT Mmm , maybe I should let THEM finish the story. Ari and Olive walk in with a tray and a bowl of soup on it covered by a napkin. Ari Hi, Elinor. We looked for beets and carrots everywhere, but we couldn’t find them! THOUGHT BUBBLE FORMS: Illustrating the story. Olive We looked and looked ... until finally we found our treasure . The veggies were buried under the ground! ARI That’s right. We learned that some veggies are actually roots, and that’s why they grow underground. olive So we decided to call our special soup.... Pan down to reveal: They pull the napkin away revealing. Olive/Ari UNDERGROUND SOUP elinor can probably take a sip on her own Elinor Aww, thank you, Explorers Ari and Olive. Ari hands the tray to Mr. Rabbit who helps Elinor take a sip. Elinor (CONT’D) <Slurrrup> . Ah, now I really DO feel better. Ari and Olive exchange a happy look. we very often end with them giggling - I think instead we can end with Elinor taking another sip here "mmmmm" ArI (to Mr. Rabbit) Told ya we were good helpers. On <SFX: LAUGHS AND GIGGLES>, we IRIS OUT, THE END.

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ELINOR WONDERS WHY EWW 165: UNDERGROUND SOUP Written by Katherine Sandford Olive and Ari’s Question: Where do carrots grow? Logline: E linor’s in bed with a case of the sniffles, so Olive and Ari decide to make some soup to help her feel better, but they can’t find the carrots. CURRICULUM GOALS LS8 . Begin to understand that there are many different kinds of living things and how they may be the same or different: a. Observe and describe similarities and differences across different types of plants. c. Group different kinds of living things into categories based on basic similarities and differences (Olive and Ari learn there are many different kinds of veggies that grow in different ways, then they group together root vegetables, where the edible parts grow underground). SEP2 . Developing and using models a. Represent observable, concrete objects, events, and findings in many different ways b. Distinguish between a model and the actual object, process, and/or events it represents c. Use simple models to support explanations (Ari and Olive draw pictures of the veggies they hope to harvest, and then compare their models to the actual veggies.) SEP3 . Planning and carrying out investigations a. Identify and use a greater variety of tools to extend the senses for observing, measuring, and recording data about objects and events b. Compare and contrast objects and events by describing similarities and differences in detail (Olive and Ari use Olive’s notebook to record information and compare and contrast their pictures to the pictures of the veggies.) SEP8 . Obtaining, evaluating and communicating information c. Describe observable phenomena using adjectives and labels d. Use basic science and engineering practice vocabulary when engaged in investigations e. Use basic science and engineering content vocabulary when investigating and describing observable phenomena f. Share findings and explanations (correct or incorrect) through a variety of methods (Olive and Ari use basic science vocabulary when describing the veggies, and they share what they discovered with Mr. Rabbit. OUTLINE – January 21, 2020 FIRST DRAFT - February 20, 2020 SECOND DRAFT: March 9, 2020 POLISH: March 27, 2020 THE END Olive Mr. Rabbit Ari Q El Elinor Mi Dad Me OLIVE/ari Art Olive and Ari (V.O.) (O.S.) (O.C.) (CONT'D) (SUBTITLE) INT EXT I/E ELINOR WONDERS WHY CHECK NOTES AFTER ELINOR'S HOUSE ELINOR'S ROOM ELINOR'S LIVING ROOM -- DAY ELINOR'S KITCHEN ELINOR'S ROOM – DAY BACK YARD -- DAY ELINOR'S BACK YARD ELINOR'S GARDEN -- DAY ELINOR'S ROOM -- DAY ELINOR'S ROOM (OUTSIDE THE WINDOW) ELINOR'S GARDEN ELINOR'S HOUSE -- DAY DAY NIGHT AFTERNOON MORNING EVENING LATER MOMENTS LATER CONTINUOUS THE NEXT DAY CUT TO: FADE IN: FADE OUT. FADE TO: DISSOLVE TO: BACK TO: MATCH CUT TO: JUMP CUT TO: FADE TO BLACK.