"Very cute episode! Mom's character/personality is developing very well. Production/Assets: we'll need to keep the costumes the secondary characters are wearing very simple - ie. props attached to current designs. " 1. EXT. FOREST -– DAY "I really like this episode and imagine it will provide great visuals. It's a lot of information for the age group but I think in this case the extra info will not take away from the meaning making opportunities. I think this draft ties the content together well. My notes below are very minor. " OPEN WIDE: It’s a beautiful day in the forest. MOVE IN ON ELINOR looking closely at a flower with a curious but uncertain expression, like she’s evaluating it. ELINOR Hmmmmmm . She turns from the flower and lifts up a small rock, spotting something under it. She seems interested for a moment before putting the rock down. ELINOR (CONT’D) Mmm, that’s not it either... WIDEN TO REVEAL: HAZEL and ARI walking ahead along the path. HAZEL Elinor? Are you coming? ELINOR Right behind you, Hazel! Elinor catches up to them and then bounces ahead. She stops suddenly to look at a weird mushroom. ELINOR (CONT’D) Ooooh. She only looks at it for a moment, then she gets interested in something else. She is energetic, hopping around and jumping over rocks in her enthusiasm. Hazel and Ari look at each other and follow, passing her. HAZEL I can’t wait for school tomorrow! If we want to keep the camera on Hazel and Ari and yet show Elinor behind them (which will be a cute scene) - a bug may be too small in frame to be seen. Perhaps she's following a frog or a bird - something a bit bigger in frame. ARI Me too, Hazel! (thinks about it) Wait, why? Behind them, we see Elinor rushing around, following a buzzing bug. HAZEL (laughing) It’s Costume Day, Ari! ARI Yes! Costume Day! We get to wear a costume to school tomorrow! Remember last year? A thought bubble forms next to Ari as he remembers his costume. It’s just him holding a baseball. ARI (CONT’D) I was a baseball AND bat! Get it? Because I AM a bat? On the thought bubble, a drawing of a baseball and bat (the kind you swing) appears next to the previous drawing. HAZEL I remember. (giggles) It was so funny. The thought bubble pops and Ari draws one wing over half of his face mysteriously. ARI This year, I’m going to be something SUPER cool and MYSTERIOUS. His dramatic pose is disrupted by Elinor, who lifts up one of his feet to look at something underneath, Ari comically staggers. ARI (CONT’D) (laughing) Whooops , careful Elinor!! if we change line 7 to Elinor following a bird - I suggest we change the bird here to a frog - its hoping along the ground which works better for Elinor to be bouncing as she follows, lifteing one of Ari's feet in he process ELINOR Sorry, Ari. Elinor bounces OS, following a bird. ARI So what are you going to dress up as, Hazel? HAZEL I’ve been working on my costume for DAYS! I’m going as something I LOVE! ARI Let me guess: a banana? Can Hazel complete the thought (about her costume) and say something like, "You'll have to wait and see"? HAZEL A BANANA??? (laughs) No...but I DO love bananas. At this point, Elinor returns from looking around. She looks a little dejected. ELINOR Sigh... ARI Hey, Elinor, what are YOU going to be for Costume Day? ELINOR (a little frustrated) I just don’t know! HAZEL Uh oh. ELINOR I’ve been looking EVERYWHERE, but I haven’t found the right idea for my costume yet. ARI Huh. ELINOR I want it to be something reeeeaaally interesting.... (she looks around) But, I don’t know what, and Costume Day is TOMORROW! HAZEL We’ll help you look for ideas, Elinor. ARI You bet - just call me idea-hunter Ari! maybe she says "aww, thank you!! you're the best!" (or we have her call them a name we can reuse- ie. 'Besties' for example) - As she puts her arms around each of them - squeezing them ELINOR (relieved) Aww , thank you! QUICK SEARCHING MONTAGE The kids look under a bush. MONTAGE: Visual - we could treat the montage like we did in the pilot during the song, of a partial image in one part of the screen, then paint bleeds to reveal anoth BG with the kids searching, then another - Instead of individual cut scenes. HaZEL Nothing under here. They check out a hole in the trunk of a large, old tree. Ari Nothing in here. They look behind the tree. ElINOR Nothing behind here! END MONTAGE - They pause, and Ari makes a show of looking around. ARI Nope, nothing interesting anywhere that I can s-... (he looks up) Yikes! Ari jumps and Elinor and Hazel look up too. ANGLE ON: An OWL, perched on a high branch above Ari’s head. It looks very majestic and peaceful and it has its eyes closed. ELINOR (in awe) <GASP!> Wooooooooow! HAZEL It’s an OWL! ARI I’ve never seen an Owl this close before. They all look up to admire. The owl does nothing for a beat. ELINOR What’s it doing? HAZEL It’s not moving. arI I’ll take a closer look! Ari flies up. ARI (CONT’D) (comically loud whisper) Its eyes are closed! (a beat later) I think it’s sleeping! ELINOR Sleeping? In the middle of the day? HAZEL Maybe it’s taking a nap. Ari flies down, a little winded. ARI Phew! I could use nap. AND a snack. ELINOR Let’s wait for the Owl to wake up! I want to see it fly - WHOOSH! Elinor pantomimes a flying owl, wings open. "x-diss seq - Hazel will be carrying her satchel (pls note this when we first see her at the top of the script) from the beginning of the episode so she will grab her book from there. We can have Ari reach into the 'pocket' of his shorts to pull out a small bag of crunchy food " hazel Ok, let’s wait. SERIES OF X-DISS . They sit down to wait, expecting it to wake at any moment. After a beat, nothing happens. They get a bit fidgety. Hazel takes out a book. Elinor stays focused on the owl. Ari unpacks a small bag. Suddenly, we hear a loud <SFX: CRUNCH> sound. Elinor and Hazel look to Ari, who has a mouthful of crunchy snack. ARI (munching) What? I’m hungry! Ari continues to crunch on his snack, with Elinor and Hazel cringing each time. Elinor gets fidgety. ELINOR Is the owl going to sleep ALL DAY? HAZEL It can’t sleep ALL day. Can it? ARI (munching) Sounds pretty good to me. Some of my cousins sleep all day. HAZEL I wonder when it eats. Ari takes a last bite of his snack. Ari wearing his watch - Please note this when we first see him at the top of the script. ARI (munching) Speaking of eating... (looks at his watch) It’s almost dinner time! HAZEL You’re right, we’d better go. Hazel and Ari grab their things and run off, out of the frame. Elinor stays back for a moment to look at the owl one last time, hoping to see it wake up. ElINOR (to herself, a wish) Oh, please - wake up! 2. ext. animal town -- sunset Over a view of Animal Town, we see the sun set and the moon rise as the sky turns a dark blue with pinpoints of stars. 3. INT. ELINOR’S BEDROOM -- NIGHT Open on Elinor in bed. She is sleeping, but she’s moving a bit as if she’s having an active dream. ELINOR (CONT’D) (in her sleep) Wake up owl... wake up! <SFX: OS MUFFLED OWL - WHOOO>. Elinor turns over but doesn’t wake up. <SFX: OWL - WHOOO>. Elinor’s eyes open and she sits up, yawning and stretching. <SFX: MUFFLED OWL WHOOO> Elinor turns to the sound, hops out of bed and goes to her window. ELINOR (CONT’D) Who’s out there? She looks outside for a moment and then opens it. <SFX: OWL (CLEAR) WHOOO!> Elinor looks confused. ELINOR (CONT’D) Who what? <SFX: OWL (CLEAR) WHOOO!> ELINOR (CONT’D) Who, me? <SFX: OWL (CLEAR) WHOOO!> Elinor gets annoyed. seems a bit odd that she'd close her window - I feel it cuts well to have the owl 'whooo' after her line 57. then we cut to Int. Parents bedroom and she enters. ELINOR (YELLING) (CONT’D) Yes I heard you! Do you mean me? I’m Elinor, that’s who! <SFX: OWL (CLEAR) WHOOO!> Elinor closes the window. 4. INT. PARENT’S BEDROOM – NIGHT Elinor tiptoes into her parents’ bedroom, where they are both sleeping. She approaches her mom’s side of the bed. ELINOR (CONT’D) (whisper comically loud) Mom! (Her mom stirs a bit.) Mom! Wake up! Ranger Rabbit wakes up and rubs her eyes. Is this conversations done in a quiet voice due to Dad still sleeping? If so, maybe line 70 she can be loud, Dad stirs..and Elinor whispers 'oh! I mean quiet observations' RANGER RABBIT What is it Elinor? Is something wrong? ELINOR I can’t sleep. RANGER RABBIT Oh, honey. What’s keeping you awake? 62-64: This is a really funny exchange! Kids might not understand the nuance of Elinor saying that she has a question (that isn't her's; from someone else). Is there anything we can do to clear that up a little? Maybe she can start line 64 by saying, "No, it's not MY question. Someone is outside my window asking ME questions." ELINOR I can’t sleep because I have a QUESTION. cute respnse from mom - but maybe 'Of course you do Hunny Bunny' or a term of endearment we'd like her to call Elinor. RANGER RABBIT Of course you do. Tell me, what is your middle-of-the-night question? ELINOR Someone is outside my window asking ME questions. They keep saying “WHO!”, and won’t stop. How is this to be read - a smile? Intrigued? RANGER RABBIT I see. ELINOR I want to go outside and see who it is. Can you come with me? Consider replacing “kit” with the words observation “tools”. RANGER RABBIT (after a breath, smiling) Yes I can. Let’s get our night-time observation kit! Elinor runs out of the room. Ranger Rabbit pulls a basket out from under the bed that has two flashlights. Elinor reappears immediately wearing her robe and slippers! ELINOR I’m ready! Are you? We don't know Ranger Rabbit well enough to get her tone here. Is she being sincere or sarcastic? We're imagining that she's all for some nighttime exploration, but correct us if we're wrong. RANGER RABBIT It’s the middle of the night. Of course I’m ready! <SFX: OS MUFFLED OWL - WHOOO> Elinor tugs on her mom’s hand. ELINOR There it is again! Come on, Mom! We need MORE OBSERVATIONS! 5. EXT. ELINOR’s HOUSE -- NIGHT Elinor and Ranger Rabbit (now wearing her robe and slippers) step out of the house. A light in the front of the house illuminates the door and immediate surroundings, but everything else nearby is dark. ELINOR (CONT’D) Wow, it’s so dark! I can’t see anything! Elinor turns on her flashlight and a cone of light illuminates a nearby bush. ELINOR (CONT’D) Is there anything awake out here? I love this part. There is an opportunity to have the viewer play along. If part of an animal is seen first or if sound clues are given the viewer can try to anticipate what they will see. RANGER RABBIT (yawning) Other than two sleepy rabbits? Let’s have a look! Elinor and Ranger Rabbit walk a little bit into the woods, their flashlights searching around them. They come to the same clearing from earlier. We hear a rustling sound in a bush. Elinor points her flashlight at it and we see a gecko briefly, before it runs into the bushes. ELINOR Wow! That was such a cool lizard! I’ve never seen one like that before. RANGER RABBIT That’s because you usually go into the forest during the day. Some animals only come out at night. Like this lizard - it’s called a gecko! Elinor searches some more. Her flashlight finds some worms wriggling on the ground. ELINOR Look at this! These worms are awake! That is SO INTERESTING! She points her flashlight around, and we see some bugs flying around, as well as some more lizards scurrying about. ELINOR (CONT’D) I wonder what all these animals are doing up so late? I like Mom's sense of humour during this 'nightime seq' RANGER RABBIT Maybe their children woke them up to go exploring? Elinor laughs, getting the joke. ELINOR <LAUGHS> Suddenly, we hear a <SFX: RUSTLE> in the bushes. Elinor and Ranger Rabbit point their flashlights at it. Out pops Mr. Raccoon, who is a little startled by the bright lights. we could have him react a bit - covers his eyes, from the light "Oh, wow..bright!" (they lower their flashlights) "Why Hello Ranger Rabbit! Hello, Elinor!" MR. RaCCOON Oh, hello, Ranger Rabbit! Hello, Elinor! ELINOR Hello, Mr. Raccoon! Are you out looking for the mysterious “who” too? MR. RACCOON Mysterious who? ELINOR Yes, who! Mr. Raccoon scratches his head. MR. RACCOON I mean, WHO are you looking for? ELINOR We’re looking for the WHO, that’s who! Mr. Raccoon looks confused. Ranger Rabbit smiles. Ranger RABBIT We are out exploring, Mr. Raccoon. Mr. RACCOON Ahh! ELINOR Why are you awake so late, Mr. Raccoon? MR. RACCOON Oh, I always get up around this time. ELINOR REALLY? Does the WHO wake you up? MR. RACCOON Who..? Never mind. No, I have to wake up to work at the bakery! ELINOR You can’t do that during the day? """Oh, no. I have to start baking the tasty treats at the night, so they’ll be ready in time for breakfast!"" we should change 'at the' to 'during the' " MR. RACCOON Oh, no. I have to start baking the tasty treats at the night, so they’ll be ready in time for breakfast! ELINOR Ohhhh... MR. RACCOON That way your favorite carrot cake muffins will be fresh from the oven when you come into my store in the morning. ELINOR Oh! I didn’t know that. But then, when do you sleep? MR. RACCOON I sleep in the afternoon when everyone else is awake. ELINOR Ohhh. MR. RACCOON Well, love to chat more, but I have to get going. Time to make the muffins! RanGER RABBIT Goodbye, Mr. Raccoon. Mr. Raccoon nods and rushes off. ELINOR (calling) Don’t forget the carrot cake ones! (to her mom) Wow, mom. There sure is a lot going on in the forest at night! Elinor starts to sing: ELINOR (CONT’D) (singing) I thought the forest was quiet at night. But now that I have my trusty flashlight, I see worms and bugs and lizards, too! But I still wonder who said... <SFX: OS OWL (CLEAR) - WHOOO> ELINOR (CONT’D) There it is again! Elinor and Ranger Rabbit look for the source of the sound. They move their flashlights around the clearing. Elinor looks up. ELINOR (CONT’D) <GASP!> Look! ANGLE ON the owl soaring in the sky. It’s above the trees and it flies and banks with amazing grace and beauty. Most important, it flies SILENTLY. Is the owl presumably grabbing food? Will we cheat this so we don't really see it? ELINOR (CONT’D) (amazed) Wooooow! The owl turns and glides down to the ground, grabbing something before landing up in the tree. <SFX: OWL - WHOOO> Elinor turns to her mother. ELINOR (CONT’D) Mom, that’s the owl Ari, Hazel and I saw on our way home! It’s so quiet I almost didn’t notice it fly by! RANGER RABBIT That’s because owl are really SILENT FLYERS. They have special feathers on their wings that don’t make any sound. we should have the Owl land on a branch here so she can observing him better when saying lines ie.109. especially for line 113 so she can get a good look at the owl's eyes eLINOR Oooh... <SFX: OWL - WHOOO> ElINOR (CONT’D) (gets it) Wait a minute. That’s who’s been saying “whoo!” It’s the Owl!! He’s up late, just like Mr. Raccoon! RANGER RABBIT Yep, owls are NOCTURNAL. That means they stay awake at night. ELINOR But why? (after a beat) Does the Owl work at a bakery too? I didn’t even know there WERE Owl bakeries. Might be good to add, “…that come out at night too” RANGER RABBIT (smiling) I don’t think so! Owls are awake at night because they eat things like bugs and worms that come out. ANGLE ON: The Owl’s eyes. RaNGER RABBIT (CONT’D) They have super special eyes that are really good at seeing things in the dark. Elinor and her mom look at the owl a moment longer. ELINOR Wow! I didn’t know there was so much happening in the forest at night. And I didn’t know that owls were so... INTERESTING! Elinor has a flash of inspiration. ELINOR (CONT’D) Mom!! I just had a GREAT idea - come on! She runs off screen followed by her mom, ANGLE ON: The beautiful Owl watches them go. <SFX: OS OWL (CLEAR) - WHOOO> 6. INT. CLASSROOM -- DAY It’s Costume Day at Elinor’s school! We open on a bunch of children in costume talking excitedly, including Hazel and Ari (but not Elinor). Hazel is dressed like a big book. Ari Oooh , nice costume, Hazel! this isnt clear - she says she's always wanted to have a book that turns the pages for her - yet she still turns the page herself. Maybe Instead "You know I love books soooo much that I've always wished I can be in one....so Now I AM!!" HAZEL Thanks, Ari! You know I LOVE books, and I always wished I had one that turned the pages for me, so check this out. She turns the pages with her trunk. ari Ha ha, AWESOME! He looks closer at one of the pages, which has some drawings of bananas. ARI (CONT’D) Wait a second...is this a book about bananas? Love this gag with Hazel. "I couldn't resist" doesn't quite sound like a preschooler, though. Is there a way to reword? Maybe, "(giggles) I really do love bananas." HAZEL (giggles) I couldn’t resist! So, what are you, Ari? ARI Me? Well, I am... ANGLE ON: Ari is dressed in a tuxedo with a cape and a top hat. He swirls his cape. ARI (CONT’D) (dramatic voice) The Mysterious Mysterioso ! Super magician, at your service! HAZEL Cool! Are you going to do some magic? cute. ARI Yes, I’m going to make my lunch disappear later. Silas, SAlly, Goat Twins, HAZEL <LAUGH> HAZEL (giggling) Very impressive, Mysterious Mysterioso . Suddenly, from behind them, we see a feathery blur rush towards them. Elinor, dressed as an owl, jumps into the scene, surprising everyone. ELINOR Whoooo ! Whoo !! WHOOOO !!! Elinor starts “flying around the classroom” as she does the dialogue below. Hazel <Gasp!> Elinor, you look just like the owl we saw yesterday! ELINOR That’s right! My mom and I stayed up all night making my costume. Isn’t it iinnnnteresting ? ARI It sure is!!! (a beat) But I thought owls slept all the time? ELINOR Nope, owls only sleep during the day, but they’re awake at night! That’s called being NOCTURNAL! HAZEL Nocturnal! I LIKE that word! ELINOR They have super good eyes for seeing in the dark. That’s when they eat their food. ARI Oohh . ELINOR AND they have special feathers that help them fly really quietly. Elinor runs around her friends with her wings spread out, not making a sound. "correction: ""So that’s why we the Owl we saw wouldn’t open its eyes! It was sleeping so it could be awake at night!""" HAZEL (figures something out) So that’s why we the Owl we saw wouldn’t open its eyes! It was sleeping so it could be awake at night! " maybe something like “good thinking Hazel”. -trying to avoid kids says others are right or wrong. " ELINOR That’s riiiigghht ( yaaaaaaawns ) Elinor lets out a biiig yawn. At that moment, Ms. Mole call the class to order. MS. Mole Alright class, time to find our places! Ms. Mole is wearing a flower costume. The kids gather. MS. MOLE (CONT’D) Welcome to COSTUME DAY! Okay, now who wants to talk about the costume they’re wearing? Silas/sally/GOAT Me! / I want to talk about my costume! / Me first! MS. MOLE Wait, where’s Elinor? The kids look around. After a beat, Ari raises his hand. Ms. MolE (CONT’D) Yes, Ari? ARI Ms. Mole, Elinor’s an owl and she was awake all night making her costume. That means just like an owl... He moves aside to reveal Elinor curled up with her head tucked under a wing, sleeping. HAZEL She’ll be sleeping all day! Ms. MOLE Oh, Elinor... We end on a close up of Elinor, smiling and breathing softly as she sleeps. EliNOr (quietly) SNOOOORE - Whooo....

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ELINOR’S TOWN EP 103 Owl Girl By: Jorge Cham and Daniel Whiteson Elinor’s Question: Why do owls sleep during the day? Logline: Elinor learns that some animals sleep during the day and are awake at night. Curriculum Goals: LS2 Begin to explore how different external features of an animal help it survive in its environment. Elinor learns that an Owl has certain characteristics that help it survive at night. SEP2: Developing and using models SEP8 Obtaining, evaluating and communicating information o Obtain information through discussing prior knowledge and observations with experts including teachers or knowledgeable adults o Use basic science and engineering content vocabulary when investigating and describing observable phenomena o Share findings and explanations (correct or incorrect) through a variety of methods Main Characters: Elinor, Hazel, Ari Secondary Characters: Ms. Mole, Ranger Rabbit, Mr. Raccoon, Owl Incidental Characters: Classroom kids Backgrounds: Forest daytime, Elinor's bedroom at night, Elinor's parent's at night, Forest at night, Classroom Props: Hazel in a book costume, Ari as a magician, Owl-Girl Elinor, Ms. Mole as a flower, flashlights, robes, slippers. OUTLINE: November 23, 2018 FIRST DRAFT: December 19, 2018 REV. FIRST DRAFT: December 20, 2018 ELINOR ARI HAZEL SALLY Kai Cam Camilla Al All Goat twins Elinor, Hazel, Ari HaZEL, Ari, ELINOR, hAZEL, aRI, sALLY SILAS ELINOR, HAZEL, ARI, sally, kai Hazel, ari, sallu, kai, Camilla, Goat Twins ELINR ELINIR OWL RANGER RABBIT MR. RACCOON SALLY BEAVER KIDS MS. Mole Silas, SAlly, Goat Twins (V.O.) (O.S.) (O.C.) (SUBTITLE) (COMICALLY loud whisper) (Asleep) (O.S. And MUFFLED) (o.s. But clear) INT EXT I/E CLUBHOUSE ON A HILL (WIDE) – DAY CLUBHOUSE -- DAY SMALL HILL -- DAY BOTTOM OF THE HILL -- DAY CLUBOUSE – LATER IRIS OUT THE END. DAY NIGHT AFTERNOON MORNING EVENING LATER MOMENTS LATER CONTINUOUS THE NEXT DAY CUT TO: FADE IN: FADE OUT. FADE TO: DISSOLVE TO: BACK TO: MATCH CUT TO: JUMP CUT TO: FADE TO BLACK.